We displayed the first draft of our short film to a small audience and they gave use positive feedback (+) and things to improve upon (-)
+ : Good range of shots
Effective use of sound
- : Make narrative more clear, perhaps have more speech
more shots of the antagonist
+: Good use of camera angles such as over the shoulder and establishing/ wide angled shots.
- : Include some extreme close ups to show the protagonist's facial expressions.
Have a clearer narrative. Level 3
+ : Suspense built well
Follows thriller conventions
- : Adjust brightness/contrast in premiere.
More/clearer dialogue
Move away from horror themes
+ : Good camera shots
Good use of lighting effect
- : make narrative more clear
more dialogue
- : I thought the music didn't relate to what was going on. I was also unsure of the
genre. Level 3
