TASK 12 Retaliation: Short Film Final Cut

TASK 11 Print Artefacts: Short Film Poster

TASK 11 Print Artefacts: Magazine Film Review

Video production feedback

Excellence is demonstrated in the creative use of a range of technical skills.

An institutional logo is created using After Effects with a signature tune to accompany a professional looking opening.  Use of cinematic bars and colour correction allow the product to look like a short film for cinematic exhibition.  Audio levels and mixing is accurate at most points and audio elements provide a lot of the meaning.  The audio is key to understanding the narrative and some of the shots. These clues are not always clear and along with some lighting issues and some shots being short in length, prevent the highest marks being awarded. However technical skill is excellent throughout with seamless editing and clear continuity due to effective planning and editing.  Music is appropriate and well sourced being copyright free.  It adds tension and creates an atmosphere.  There are a range of shots and use of the camera is controlled.  The narrative is coherent and follows the conventions of a short film ending on a twist as the character realises he has been set up. Credits reach near professional standards creating a professional looking short film.  35/40

TASK 13 Evaluation Q4: How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

Research and Planning

We used a variety of tools to assist in our research and planning. the browser we used was Firefox, as it allowed us to access some websites we needed to use for research which on the other browsers we had access to were filtered, and would hinder our production. With it, we accessed websites we see examples of short films. Websites such as Vimeo on YouTube were very useful for this. We looked at a wide range of short films to get a grasp on the structure of them, and to build up the knowledge on what to include in our own. An example of this one that we found on YouTube called “The Hedgehog”.  Whereas the film was a completely different genre, we were able to see how it fit a full narrative in under ten minutes.

To research what our target audience would be we used the YouGov.co.uk. On this website it uses government data to find statistics on what groups of people like or do, such as where they prefer to shop, how much they make and what films they enjoy. This was useful, as we used it to find the general audiences that enjoyed films similar to ours, to help find our target audience. However all these films we looked at had totally different audiences according to the website. We decided that since we could not find a solid group of so we could just label our target audience as Thriller fans.

We had to pitch our short film idea to an audience. To format it we used Microsoft PowerPoint. The software allowed us to format different aspects of our idea, such as narrative and character into different slides. We chose to use this over other tools to present this was due to it’s simplicity and how easy it would be to change, if we had any new ideas shortly before presenting the pitch. Where as tools such as Prezi are more visually engaging, we felt the simplicity of PowerPoint made more time for us to create ideas.

To store all our research, making it accessible at anytime, we used Blogger.com to upload our planning, such as scripts, storyboards ad general research on short films and print productions. Blogger is very useful as you can embed videos and images into the html code letting you show something you are referencing such as a part of a scene or a soundtrack that inspired your idea. This give anyone reading it reference to what you are discussing in the planning. Blogger is more useful than just using hard copies of research and planning as keeping it digitally not only makes it more accessible and secure but presents in a tidy and readable manner

Production and Post Production

We filmed our footage using the JVC 3CCD Pro HD Camera. We chose this over the over the Sony Handicam as it has full manual settings, and this was essential as some of the locations we filmed at had harsh lighting which we had to configure the camera for before shooting. Another benefit of using the JVC was that it had manual focus, and this allowed us to achieve the shallow depth of field in the shot where the protagonist is sitting at his table. The Sony Handycam would have allowed us to film in HD, but had full automatic settings and this would have limited us.

We used a Camlink tripod to stabilise the camera for most shots as to not disorient the viewer. However this was not necessary for the certain shots, which were done handheld for the purpose of building tension.

For the final shot when the police arrived, we used artificial lighting to suggest that they are outside the protagonists home. This was done with a phone application that was behind the camera so that it reflected into the scene. We wanted it to end with only seeing the light of the police as this adds to the mystery of the cut-to-black ending.

We decided to use Adobe Premiere to edit our short film, as it is industry standard editing software. What is great about Premiere is that it allowed us to colour correct our footage within the sequence and we could then add the same preset to other shots. We could also edit and add sound easily within the sequence.

Our music was sourced from Incompetech.com. Incompetech has a large library of royalty free music, which meant that we could find the right soundtracks to fit with the narrative and emotion of specific scenes in the short film. Also, being royalty free means that there was no copyright issues with using the music as long as we gave credit to who created it and the website it came from, which we did at the end of the film in the credits.

To create the production logo in post production we used Adobe After Effects. Like Premiere, this is also industry standard and gave us a lot of options as to what the logo was going to look like. We could then export it as a .mov file to be imported into Adobe Premiere without any issues. We found After Effects to be the most challenging software to use as it was unlike any other software we had used in the past and it had a steep learning curve. Therefore, we used YouTube to look at tutorials on the basic effects to use. Should we have had more time, we would have likely spent more time in After Effects to find more complex effects that would have made our logos look better and more professional.

To obtain sound effects we used freesound.org, which had a library of free sounds which could be downloaded. We used this to add sounds that we were unable to during filming, such as the sound outside when the protagonist is at his table inside.

Print Products

To create our print products, we used Photoshop for both the poster and the two page magazine spread.

To create the main image of the poster, we took photographs of the main actor and a mask using a Nikon D3100 DSLR and a green screen. This made the editing process easier as the green stood out and could be taken away from the images we needed.

Then, to create the wanted look of having the mask blend into the actor’s face, we changed the opacity of the mask. However, we found the edge of the mask was still obvious against the actor’s face. To correct this, we added a dark gradient to the bottom of the entire image. Because this made the image too dark, we had to adjust the brightness to that the image would be seen clearly when printed. Then we blended the edges with the blur tool to soften the mask against the actor’s face. We tried to feather the edge with the edge define settings, but this didn’t give the desired effect.

We also then made the credits for the bottom of the poster. This took a long time to do because we had to use multiple layers for each name and phrase. Then, we had to arrange the credits so that they were central.

The use of the colour blue was important in our poster as it linked our print products to our production. We first created the main title of the poster in after effects, creating a blue smoke around the text, then used to same blue to accent the important information on the poster (the release date and the actor’s names). We also tinted the main image of the poster in the same colour used in the production to create continuity between the production and the poster.

Creating the review was a little easier than creating the poster, but it still had its challenges as we used Photoshop in a different way. Instead of using various effects to create a main image, we instead had to shape text, frame images and create bold titles.

To create the various titles, we used different techniques within Photoshop. The more simplistic titles “Director’s Interview” and “Retaliation” were simply created with the text tool in Photoshop. We used a similar colour scheme to the colour schemes used in magazines, such as ‘Empire’. To create the “In Cinemas” title, we had to use the text tool and the shape tool. First we created a separate canvas and added the basic text, using the Times New Roman font. We then changed the colour on the text to two shades of blue so that the text would stand out from the rest of the article. It became tricky to create the white line within the bold text as we had to use the shape tool. We decided to create the text like this because it is used on all the film reviews we analysed. Using the shape tool, we traced the shape of each letter with a white line, make short squares through the letter.

We then added in the main body text. We first wrote the review in a Word document then pasted it onto the main canvas. We had to do this in sections so that all the text would fit into the place where we wanted it to be. We had to leave space for images so that the review would be aesthetically pleasing and so that the text would be broken up.

We then filled in the gaps using the shape tool. The first shape we placed was the “Out Now” circle. We placed this in the space where we thought would be best and hen shaped the text around the circle using the move tool. We then filled in the rest of the gaps with bold line which linked to the layout of the “Empire Magazine” articles we originally looked at.

TASK 13 Evaluation Q3: What have you learned from audience feedback?

Audience feedback was very vital in the creating of our media product, thought pre and postproduction; even during production feedback was very useful. An example of feedback pre production was drafting various ideas to see which people liked more. The audience feedback was very important during post-production in this project.  As a lot of the content was added in after the first cut, which was still missing some takes and some sound effects and voice-overs.

The first feedback we got during this production was when we showcased a few ideas to our class to see which they liked more, this was very basic and before we had much information about the ideas, just how they sounded. We then pitched our idea to a larger audience of our class, to see their opinion on it. We had rough outlines of what we were doing, which it was supposed to be Crime/Thriller/Detective short film, which from the feedback we gathered the idea would not work as well as it could, in the form of a short film.

As a result of this, we decided to change our idea with something we believed would be much more fitting in the form of a short film, which was purely a Thriller short film, which people liked the premise of the basic ideas. This was a more practical idea that would fit much easier within the timescale of five minutes, which we were limited to. One of the most difficult tasks we faced in preproduction was creating an understandable narrative within the timescale, as we did not have much time to develop characters. We used audience feedback to work on a narrative that was understandable but still somewhat challenging, leaving the audience to uncover the narrative on their own.

After the production of our first draft, which was unfinished as it was missing some footage we had yet to film.  We exhibited this draft to the class, which we then asked for general feedback, rather than feedback on targeted issues, which we did for later drafts. The main feedback we got from our first draft was about the narrative. Members the audience we shown this to found the narrative unclear and confusing, which was not ideal, as this was one of our largest concerns. We thought that we would act upon the feedback and work to create a stronger narrative. Which we were able to do in the remaining shots, which we added more shots and sounds to indicate that the protagonist was in danger. Such as an expansion of the planned fight scene, which was yet to be filmed. We decided to change the outcome of the fight scene and to make it longer, to add more conflict into the narrative. As well as this, we added some sounds, such as the noise the protagonist hears from the outside.

After building on our first draft, we did the same with our secondary draft, which was the final draft before the short film was complete. This time we asked for feedback targeted on our narrative, sound (predominantly music choices) and pacing of it all. The feedback went well, the positive feedback we got about the music was that it fit very well and built atmosphere, and it matched the pacing very well. However there was concern over the narrative. Mostly in the beginning, as people could not understand what the phone call conversation was about. We decided to use this feedback my adding in some dialogue we cut from the script early on in pre-production. We added it in using a voice recorded, and fitted it into the gaps that we left in the opening dialogue. Our audience found this helpful to explain the flow of the narrative.

Over all audience feedback was very important in guiding us in creating a media product suitable for our target audience, as thrillers are a very narrative driven genre, and through feedback we revolved this issue effectively. As well as this positive feedback was useful in letting us know what didn't need to change, with let us know that what we were doing was going in the right direction. 

TASK 13 Evaluation Q2 How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

TASK 13 Evaluation Q1: In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

Audience Feedback 1

  We displayed the first draft of our short film to a small audience and they gave use positive feedback (+) and things to improve upon (-)

 

 

+ : Good range of shots

            Effective use of sound

- : Make narrative more clear, perhaps have more speech

              more shots of the antagonist

+: Good use of camera angles such as over the shoulder and establishing/ wide angled shots. 

- : Include some extreme close ups to show the protagonist's facial expressions.

              Have a clearer narrative. Level 3

+ : Suspense built well

            Follows thriller conventions

- : Adjust brightness/contrast in premiere.

              More/clearer dialogue

              Move away from horror themes

+ : Good camera shots

             Good use of lighting effect

- : make narrative more clear

              more dialogue

+ l: Really good camera work and good location used

- : I thought the music didn't relate to what was going on. I was also unsure of the

              genre. Level 3

DRAFT Print Product

Here are some print products. They were various design ideas that we wanted to draft out to see which would look better as the final piece.

Creating an Opening Title

For my project I decided it would be better to make our own title for a production company. For this I used Adobe After Effects and created one from scratch. The software is industry standard, so I wanted to make it as professional as possible. After watching a couple of tutorials on youtube for the software and learning from just playing around with the software I managed to create a functioning opening title. However I also wanted to add sound and fade effects to it, so I imported it to Premier Pro, with the main film footage, and added the sound effects on to it there. However, one problem I had was the first time I imported it the clip came out at a smaller resolution than I wanted so I rendered it again in After Effects and exported it again, and the quality was much better.

DRAFT Retaliation

• the volume of the music is too loud at points
• one of the cuts is delayed and needs to be edited
• lighting when shown on a projector may be an issue
• we have yet to film the ending
• the narrative may not be clear at this point
• sound effects need to be added

We asked some questions about our film and some of them were :

What is the narrative?
Can you notice the colour correction?
How does it fit the thriller genre?
How does the soundtrack create a mood or an atmosphere?
What is the audience for this short film?
Where would you expect to see this short film?
Is the pace of editing suited to the style of the film?
We switched the aspect ratio from 16:9 to 2.39:1 which is common to Thriller films. Do you like    this style?
Is there enough dialogue?
Is the lighting an issue?






Here is also some feedback we gathered from an audience:

November Feedback Response

Your short film has a clear progression of shots and the bars are effective in giving it a cinematic look. Shots are of a good quality and framing and composition are proficient showing excellent technical skill in use of the camera. Audio has been considered and a JVC camera has been used which shows ambition and an ability to use a more advanced camera.

Music is appropriate and builds tension ass does the length of shots. Feedback may indicate that shots are lengthy but this suits the style of the short film.

Music is copyright free as it is sourced from Incomputech so make this clear in your web-log or put it in the credits.

Document your creative journey

I don't think you need to overdub sound but maybe add some ambient sounds or effects.

The narrative is clear. Make sure that the story is not cliched.  Be original and think of a twist at the end or defy expectations.  I am intrigued as to how you will resolve the narrative.  this is the key to level 4. 

 My response:
I think that the length of the shot fits well, as we want time to feel drawn out, like how it would feel in the protagonists situation. It is intended that we credit the appropriate sources that we used for our production. We also intend to add ambient sound effects and have plans to leave the narrative with a unique and exciting ending.
 

November feedback

Your short film has a clear progression of shots and the bars are effective in giving it a cinematic look. Shots are of a good quality and framing and composition are proficient showing excellent technical skill in use of the camera. Audio has been considered and a JVC camera has been used which shows ambition and an ability to use a more advanced camera.

Music is appropriate and builds tension ass does the length of shots. Feedback may indicate that shots are lengthy but this suits the style of the short film.

Music is copyright free as it is sourced from Incomputech so make this clear in your web-log or put it in the credits.

Document your creative journey

I don't think you need to overdub sound but maybe add some ambient sounds or effects.

The narrative is clear. Make sure that the story is not cliched.  Be original and think of a twist at the end or defy expectations.  I am intrigued as to how you will resolve the narrative.  this is the key to level 4.

TASK 10 Filming: Day 2

The second day of filming was considerably more successful than the first. We decided to re-shoot what we had done previously, so there are no lighting mix ups from shot to shot. We again used the JVC camera to take our shots, and managed to do them at much better quality then previously.

We filmed at the similar time to the first shoot, however as we were prepared we managed to get through shots a lot better. The main issue was how soon it got dark, however we got a good portion of our filming complete.

For the next session of filming we will have all shots completed.

TASK 10 Filming: Day 1

The equipment we used was the JVC camera as well as a tripod to hold the camera still while we filmed. We decided on using this due to the good quality of sound it can pick up alongside its quality in tracking moving, which is important to our film. We

TASK 10 Risk Assessment

	Risk Assessment Form
ACTIVITIES:     Post Production		HAZARDS & CONTROLS:    Tripping on wires (keep wires on desktop), Mac overheats (ensure they are maintained by technicians).

Activity Title:	To edit our short film
Activity Description:	To go into the editing suite to edit our short film.
List those managing this Activity and their competence:	Joe Hinton – Editor Connor Hanlon – Special Effects Samantha Bowles – Print Product
Who & how many are at risk from this Activity?	Joe Hinton, Connor Hanlon, Samantha Bowles – 3.

Hazards How could someone become hurt or made ill	Control measures How are you going to prevent this from happening?
Tripping on wires to cause injury.	Ensure all wires are organised and on the desktop so as to not trip.
Mac overheats to cause fire.	Ensure the technicians check the iMacs before use.

Risk Level:  After your controls have been applied what is your assessment of the risk level of this activity?	Low

	Risk Assessment Form
ACTIVITIES:    Filming the short film.		HAZARDS & CONTROLS:    Fire (fire alarm), Tripping (don’t film in rain), Malfunctioning Equipment (don’t film in rain).

Activity Title:	Filming the short film.
Activity Description:	To go on Location to film the short film.
List those managing this Activity and their competence:	Joe Hinton – Director Connor Hanlon – Actor, Costume Designer, Producer Samantha Bowles – Producer Reiss Hall - Actor
Who & how many are at risk from this Activity?	Joe Hinton, Connor Hanlon, Samantha Bowles, Reiss Hall – 4.

Hazards How could someone become hurt or made ill	Control measures How are you going to prevent this from happening?
Tripping over equipment.	Organise filming equipment and place in safe location whilst not in use. Ensure member of team is present with equipment at all times to ensure they are safe.
Fire at Location	Ensure Fire alarm is in working order at house location.
Rain in outside shots: Crew could slip on wet surface Equipment could get wet and malfunction.	Stop filming in rain. Only film in overcast conditions.

Risk Level:  After your controls have been applied what is your assessment of the risk level of this activity?	Medium

TASK 8 Pitch

Pitch from joehintonmedia

TASK 10 Recce

For our risk assessment we took photos of the environments which we would be filming in to identify risks.

TASK 5 Coursework, Short Film : Script